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Ain't he a cutie!
Transformice is a multiplayer game where you play as a mice in many roles to take place in!
Website - www.transformice.com/
Steam - store.steampowered.com/app/335…
So yeah, this is my character in the game. My username is "Birdofacumen" and I've decided to call him Rin! /^O^/
FIRST TIME MAKING THOSE SHADOWS! I'M REQUESTING CRITIQUES IF POSSIBLE
Also, Prixii brought me to this game in the first place ;>
<-- That's her!
MAKE SURE YOU WATCH HER AND THE FAV THE HECK OUT OF HER GALLERY
Transformice is a multiplayer game where you play as a mice in many roles to take place in!
Website - www.transformice.com/
Steam - store.steampowered.com/app/335…
So yeah, this is my character in the game. My username is "Birdofacumen" and I've decided to call him Rin! /^O^/
FIRST TIME MAKING THOSE SHADOWS! I'M REQUESTING CRITIQUES IF POSSIBLE
Also, Prixii brought me to this game in the first place ;>
<-- That's her!MAKE SURE YOU WATCH HER AND THE FAV THE HECK OUT OF HER GALLERY
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactLines:
lines are relatively thin, but kinda messy all around. few places i can point out; on some of the fur tufts they cross, on the left shoulder one line doesnt touch the other at all, on the tail the end has a thick part, and on the candy there is multiple spots where i can see where a line ends and other starts.
Propotions:
candy wrapper ends are way too big, the scarf is too stiff and it should form to the shoulders a little, tail is a bit wonky, the chest fur looks like a splat instead pof fur
Misc:
ear blushing is not something that happens, why even??